This came from something Aet Lindling said in the chat - I noticed her say "I once found a man named Oink", and I said it sounded like the started of a limerick, so I decided to write it. Enjoy!
I once found a man named Oink,
Who went to a party with Snoink
He said he liked pigs,
So they ate a bunch of figs,
And now Snoink is married to Oink.
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...bad thoughts...bad thoughts...*PTSD*...*schizophrenia*...*dies*...
This is the most worthless piece of crap EVER.
No OMG I loved it, I really did, Matt. Snoink, good luck and much...fertility...make pig babies!
A beautiful piece about true love in its most perfect form. 'Mazing, Matt, just amazing.
Haha. This was fun. It made me smile. I agree with Gryphon about "lots of figs". Think it would suit the rhythm better. If I really want to nit pick, I can suggest adding a syllabyl to the first line. I'd also suggets finding a new rhyme in the last line...but nothing really rhymes with "oink"...anyway....if I stay any longer I'll ramble (even more) so I should leave this fun poem now...
Jas
Ah, Snoink, I'm sure we all wish you much happiness with your Oink. ^.~
Haha, this is hilariously cute! The most random things are thought up during computer conversations XD.
Boink rhymes
Aet:
That is the deepest, most profound thing I have ever read.
XD
Haha. Yes, Snoink, I would love to see the wedding pictures.
haha, funny
hehehe..funny... Snoink got married! Why wasn't I invited to the wedding??
First reaction: EEP! I wasn't playing neopets... honest!
Second reaction: Wait... this is in narrative poetry. Weird...
Third reaction: *click*
Fourth reaction: ...wtf?
Fifth reaction: I'm married!
So yeah. I am speechless.
xD I love random Chat conversations that lead to fun little poems.
Beautifully done. *applauds*
-Saint Razorblade
The Official YWS Pirate
Haha, this is awesome!
Snoink must be the only thing ever that rhymes with oink. This is so cute...sorry I couldn't be of any help, but it IS a limerick.
Cheers,
Camille
haha, nice job Matt--i wouldn't of done that well...but Snoink was part my idea. lol! well...wait, maybe i said spoink...argh...lol
Hehe, this was great. It's been a long time since I've seen a limerick. I guess they don't pop up much in my daily life.
My only problem with it is "a bunch of figs." It just doesn't seem to fit into the meter of the limerick. Perhaps "lots of figs" would work better.
Anyway, I applaud you and your whimsical rhyme. I'm glad they were able to find happiness together.
~GryphonFledgling
Figs must be a very strong aphrodisiac XD
Very cute matt, very cute! Seriously...nothing rhymes with oink! Haha!
Lol. Aww, that's cute! ^_^ Congrats to Mr. and Mrs. Oink! Nice idea, Matt.
~*Syd*~